Feedback on evaluation Task 2

I like the presentation, in fact this is excellent.  I particularly think that you have carefully considered the consistency of the campaign and it's placement.  You have clearly considered the controversial nature of the video and images and how this may be scheduled without upsetting the audience.  In fact I think you have nailed an explanation of what controversy is caused in the music video and how this fits into the overall campaign and brand image of the band.  You attempt to sustain this image across the MV and ancillary tasks.  I also think that you incorporate Dyer's star image well into your entry which again adds depth to the arguments that you make.